Nowadays, people of all ages from certain parts of the world spend most of the time at home rather than going outdoors. Discuss the reasons, is this negative or positive development?

The question of where to spend our free

time

has long been debated. Some people believe that staying indoors is the best use of their

time

, whereas others feel that engaging in outdoor

activities

are better. While the optimal use of free

time

is subjective, I think it is better to spend more

time

outside the

home

. It is easy to understand why many choose to relax at

home

nowadays. With the

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competition, numerous people work long and exhausting hours in order to ensure job security or

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promotion. When the working day is done, most would choose to return

home

and rest, rather than head out to play sports or meet friends.

This

is made even more attractive by the advances in entertainment technology, with most homes having a plethora of devices

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help you unwind. From High Definition televisions to

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computer consoles, our homes offer a wide range of

activities

to help us pass the

time

. Even so, the reliance on technology as a way to relax is not without its consequences. Spending

time

at

home

doing sedentary

activities

will increase the risk of developing associated health problems,

such

as obesity, high blood pressure, and diabetes.

Additionally

, using your computer as a means of communication and entertainment is likely to weaken the bonds you share with family, friends, and

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, leading to

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in social cohesion.

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outside mitigate both of these potential risks, as light exercise will keep you in good health and social interactions strengthen the relationships we have with others while offering mutual enjoyment. While it is reasonable to want to spend

time

at

home

in order to recharge your batteries after a long day at work, it is important to make

time

for more social

activities

too.

This

will not only have a great effect on your social life but

also

improve your overall health and well-being.