In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want without paying. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Nowadays, the popularity of printed
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as well as
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books
has been declined.
On the other hand
, it seems that online reading preference will become
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mainstream in the
future
due to the fact that no money is needed to pay. In my opinion, I
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with the above notion. The most important reason is that the benefit of online reading is not only paying is no longer needed but it
also
more convenient and
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to the updated information. Obviously, some
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or
books
may only
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in their country.
Therefore
, those people who are far away from their usually cannot get in touch with those
books
immediately.
However
, if
books
or even
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can be read through the internet,
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of borders and limitations can be tackled.
For instance
, European individuals can easily understand what is happening right now in Asia with a faster and easier mean through the internet. It is no doubt that
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the exchange of information as well as values in a faster way.
Moreover
, regarding the importance of environmental protection., reading via net
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as a great tool. It is suggested that the adverse effects brought by the human activities for publishing
books
like deforestation pose a variety of negative impacts on the ecosystem. After trees being
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,
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of animals was disappeared. It is clear that
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the
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biodiversity is badly affected
as a result
of it.
Furthermore
,
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trees are available for absorbing greenhouse gases generated by
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being
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.
Consequently
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It definitely
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to a big climate problem in the
future
.
That is
why reading online will substitute the printed
books
or
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in the
future
. To conclude, due to the advantage of convenient and environmental-friendly when we adopt to read
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the internet, it is sure that printed
newspaper
and
books
will be diminished in the following
future
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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