Some people think that children should be taught at school to recycle materials and avoid waste. Other people believe that children should be taught this at home. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

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contemporary era recycling is
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topic. Some individuals opine that provide the
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knowledge
of
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things
and avoid waste in
school
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deemed that
home
is batter for learning
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things
.
this
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my opinion. I,
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side with
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view. To commence with, those who supports the former view, they have certain
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reasons
lessons
for that, the main nub is
school
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better place to learn for students but
also
they can execute various
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student can develop a
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plethora
of
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the technique
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of recycling and
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avoid
unusable
things
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taught
by teachers. Even faculties have
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range of
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knowledge
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this
help to identify which material is good for
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process or it should not be throw
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.
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, there are viable reasons that can not be keep away.
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, those who
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with
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view.
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following
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reasons.
firstly
,
home
is
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place to get
things
very quickly and
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effectively
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affectively
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, because most of the time students
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there. In day to day life, children observed various
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when their parents do actions
such
as seeds of crops plant into their backyard and afterwards its grow and gives that fruits or
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vegetables
so
this
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impact on children's psychology.
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, I believe that
home
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better
place
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to teach
this
thing because
some time
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sometimes
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in
school
people can not bother about wasting due to lethargic or
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business
, as a
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consequence
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of
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thing
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unfortunately
. Whereas
,
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these kind
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of
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can not
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happen
happened
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of parents, they are very aware
about
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their children. In recapitulation, it can be
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that
although
school
is good for
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but
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when it comes to
recycle
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recycling
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or wasting
then
home
is
outweight
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outweigh
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advantages of
school
owing to practical, observation and quick learning.
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