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Write an essay to describe a sports player you like most

#sports #player
Watching
sports
 is not my hobby so I don't know much about
sports
 stars. But
a
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famous
football
 players like Lionel
Messi
 make it impossible for me not to know him because every time there is a big
football
 match in European countries, social networking sites appear famous player names like him. We all know
Messi
 is famous for his good
football
 games so it's not surprising that someone who doesn't like to watch
sports
 like me is a fan of him.
Although
Messi
 is European and has a passion for
sports
, his height is only average. maybe because he often plays
sports
, he has a nice and well-proportioned figure. He still looks young on the outside, if I didn't know his real age I would think he's around 24. He has an angular face with tanned skin and his big black eyes and high nose showed his intelligence. His beard makes his appearance even more elegant. The highlight of his face is his thin lips and bright smile which makes him more friendly.
Besides
, his neat short hair has enhanced his handsomeness. As a
football
 player, most people are probably familiar with the image of
Messi
 wearing
football
 player clothes or when he attends interviews he will wear elegant suits. As for his personality, through his actions towards his
fans
,
for example
, when he filmed a clip to thank and express his emotions to his 100-year-old
fans
, those actions show showed his friendliness and respect for everyone's
fans
.
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 we can see
Messi
's arm has a long tattoo so he can be a very strong person . A
sports
 enthusiast like him, perhaps his daily job is to coach
football
 team members and practice his
football
 match preparation skills.
Messi
tend
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 to be rather arrogant. maybe it's just something that's not right and because of a celebrity, it would be indispensable for him to have scandals on social media. I'm a big fan of
Messi
 through
football
 matches.
Although
 there is bad news about him on social media, his actions towards
fans
 make me believe that he is a
sports
 star who deserves to be loved by everyone.
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