Some people consider price as most important thing to consider when buying a product (such as a cell phone) or a service (e.g. medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, since there are many brands or
service
providers for the same service
or product
, it can be purchased for different prices. Some people believe that it is important to consider the price
of a product
or a service
when purchasing it, while others think that price
does not matter. In this
essay, I will discuss both views and explain why I agree that it is important to consider the price
.
To begin
with, some individuals believe that price
is not an essential factor for a product
or a service
. They believe that the same product
with 100$ and 40$ gives the same outcome. For instance
, a person who buys an iPhone which price
is more than 2000$ would experience almost the same services
and facilities that give by a 1000$ Samsung phone. Since a product
provides the same output even though they are two different prices, many people tend to buy the low price
item as it saves them money.
However
, it is incontrovertible that price
reflects the quality
of a product
or service
. There are some services
especially medical services
which the price
depends on the quality
of treatments and facilities they use. To illustrate, if a person needs to do cataract surgery, there are packages with different price
ranges that can be chosen. However
, a package with a low price
uses low-quality
lenses whereas a package with a higher price
uses high-quality
lenses which is durable and have no side effects. Since low-quality
medical treatments could be affected a person's life, in such
cases, it is important to consider quality
products.
In summary, some people believe that price
is an essential factor to consider when buying products and services
whereas others believe it does not matter. Since in some cases, the price
reflects its quality
, it is important to consider price
as a factor when purchasing durable products and services
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite