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Planting trees is very important for the environment. Some people say trees should be planted in the vacant areas of the cities and towns, while other says housing facilities should be built instead. Do you agree or disagree ?

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Planting trees is essential for the environment. While some people believe that saplings should be planted in vacant areas of cities others are of the opinion that the area should be used for constructing buildings. In my opinion, I contend that we need to focus on growing plants as it is beneficial for human beings. There are two primary reasons for
this
.
To begin
 with, we need to promote nature in cities and towns where large empty areas are being used for construction purposes.
Moreover
,
this
 will facilitate the reduction of pollution levels in cities.
For instance
, in a recent study, it was found that planting several trees allowed for the oxygen levels to soar and thereby reducing the dust in the air.
Subsequently
, allowing people to breathe fresh air
instead
 of contaminated oxygen. Everyone is aware of how global warming is impacting the world.
Therefore
, in order to make the situation better, we need to start planting seeds so that in the long run they will play a role in improving the environment.
Furthermore
, nature is known to reduce the effects of greenhouse gases on the planet.
For example
, if we increase the oxygen supply of the world by adding seeds to the soil it will eventually help in cutting down the overall gases. By way of conclusion, several people want buildings to increase in scarcely populated urban areas,
however
, I am of the opinion that we need to put our complete focus in ensuring that we increase the greenery all over the world.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urban forestry
  • Green infrastructure
  • Ecosystem services
  • Carbon sequestration
  • Urban sprawl
  • Biodiversity
  • Renewable resources
  • Sustainable development
  • Mixed-use development
  • Environmental stewardship
  • Affordable housing
  • Density
  • Zoning regulations
  • Public policy
  • Climate action
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