Some people believe that computers are more a hindrance than a help in today's world. Others feel that they are such indispensable tools that they would not be able to live or work without them. In what ways are computers a hindrance? What is your opinion? Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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nowadays is influenced by a connection in communication,
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industry development, and
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artificial
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(AI).
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is used to create and control all of those
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are a hindrance to drive the
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a health problem and lacking
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concentration, or some negative information and comments.
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development as they are a
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creation of
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and help
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to create new things.
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of information which
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of data, used as a
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to type orders and systems in manufacturing, and used as programs to help
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solve both complex and general problems by AI. These prove that
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are a key to drive and help today’s
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also
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in negative ways. Many
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have health problems because they
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too much:
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office syndrome.
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such
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impact of
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in
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field.
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, inaccurate information or fake news, and unsuitable
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for children. These are reasons
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some
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that
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are a hindrance
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today’s
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. To sum up,
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are a crucial
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which is used to drive the
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some
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believe these are a hindrance, but
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because they
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them in a wrong way. I think we need
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to help us develop today’s
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