Most people do not care enough about environmental issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In the past century,
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global warming and polar ice caps melting
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become a huge environmental crisis. has been increasing at an alarming rate.
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majority of the population does not believe that environmental issues are major problems. I strongly agree that people are not affected by the vast destruction of our natural habitat, the pollution of the oceans and the deforestation will be addressed in
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, the oceans
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a major role in a
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of scientific cycles including evaporation and it is
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one of the top food sources
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humans as well as animals. But since the introduction of plastics, it is found that people have been dumping a
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of plastic waste
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the sea, causing poisoning of fishes and other sea creatures.
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, causing harm to humans as well.
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, plastic digested inside the fishes had been found very harmful to the human some data showing it could
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cause cancer.
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since the population of the world is increasing day by day. There is a huge demand for land to make homes and factories.
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, there is a
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of deforestation, causing advert effects on the environment.
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, a
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of animals are going extinct because they do not have a place to live, their homes are getting destroyed. In conclusion, if people actually cared enough to save the environment they will not be cutting down trees and throwing waste in
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. They will want to preserve the environment and advocate for the rights of animals as well. So, that it can be preserved for
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future generations.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • prioritize
  • immediate needs
  • connect with
  • distant
  • abstract
  • economic considerations
  • growing awareness
  • active participation
  • initiatives
  • movements
  • impacts
  • well-being
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