museums and art galleries should concentrate on works that show history and culture of their own country Ruther than works of the other parts in the world to what extent do you agree or disagree.

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history

to upcoming generations. There are

museums

and

art

galleries

that should concentrate. On

history

and

culture

works, Ruther than part of other works of the globe. I agree with the statement. I would like to explicate at length in the upcoming paragraph. Commencing with the prominent reason why

museums

and

art

galleries

should take attention to save our

culture

and

history

resources. In fact, they are the pride of our

nation

. The upcoming generation

also

learns about

this

and they are still for a long time. the tourists

also

visit our country to seeing. In

this

advanced pace world. There are several

nation

's damaged

culture

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and histories. The building

also

stores like own religious and few things happened in past. There are symbols because

museums

and

art

galleries

are great resources to save

history

and

culture

.

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, the government to tohave take a decision on

this

. The

history

and

culture

remind past-time things in a

nation

, and educated people. If they can not save him, they are damaged in upcoming years. The

nation

knows for its own

history

. They can be limited in books. Why do

museums

and

art

galleries

take attention to him and take care of the cultural and historical resources

.

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In conclusion, the government in order to concentrate on

history

and

culture

work of the

nation

.

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very important.

Although

,

museums

and

art

galleries

should concentrate on

this

Ruther than other works.