Some people think that older employees contribute most to the success of a company. Others think that younger people play a more vital role. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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elderly

workers

are the biggest contributor to the

success

of an organization. Others,

however

, argue that young

employees

contributes

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more than

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older

workers

.

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essay will discuss both sides followed by a logical opinion. On one side, the reason why older people are considered the primary reason

of

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organizational

success

is because of their skills and

experience

. It means a great

amound

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amount

of

experience

is contained by older

employees

which assists them to take

work related

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decisions wisely.

In addition

, due to

hands on

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experience

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they are less likely to commit errors at

work

which certainly improves the quality of

work

as well as the probability of

success

.

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,

work

delivered to a customer with

a

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higher accuracy is often

appriciated

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appreciated

and attracts other customers as well to avail the services which certainly results in the business expansion and

success

.

On the other hand

, young

bloods

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are considered to be more influential towards to

success

of a company.

This

is because of their

flexible

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and

open

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to

learn

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behavior

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. It means

unlike

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older

employees

, the young

employees

are

fresh minded

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and could be moulded as per the organizational perspective to desperately meet its targets that

gurantees

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guarantees

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success

.

In addition

, the

risk

appitite

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appetite

of young

workers

are significantly higher than the older ones and more

risk

results

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more profit.

For instance

, the adult management

workers

often take a

risk

of managing multiple projects at the same time which is often avoided by older ones.

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, the profit

as well as

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success

become

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certain. Conclusively, where the older

employees

can be considered a bigger contributor towards the organizational

success

by their skills and

experience

, the young

employees

take a lead by their versatile attitude as well as courage to take

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risk

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. In my opinion, for the

success

of an organization in a realistic world, a combination and a contribution of both young

as well as old

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, as well as old employees,

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employees

is required.