Advantages and disadvantages of mobile phones in our daily lives

In
this
modern era, technology is going very vast day by day.
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are
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success in
this
robotic era. It is argued that mobile
phones
have some benefits in our regular life,
however
, some of them are contradicted with
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statements. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss
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pros and cons of mobile
phones
. Every new machinery
that is
developed, has a lot of benefits for future generations.
First
and foremost, cell
phones
have made very easier life
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human beings. They can easily talk or see
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another person even they are living in other cities or countries as well.
In addition
, with the help of the internet, we can know everything about each corner news of the whole world.
Moreover
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phones
also
assist to capture the moments of our daily activity,
for
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photos, videos
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etcetera
. In spite of
this
, it has been a mandatory gadget in a student or a professional life.
On the other hand
, no doubt digital
phones
have more advantages in the human growth still it has some
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disadvantages
which have bad effects in our environment.
Firstly
, some youngsters or adults
also
misuse the internet, they are making
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videos of another individual and
then
blackmail them.
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Furthermore
, sometimes humans are used to
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cellular
phones
that's why they have lost their eyesight and it is a reason
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other maladies as well.
Additionally
, it can be said that the internet is a principal cause of delinquency in
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juveniles
because they always want to
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try
something new. In conclusion, it is commonly understood that
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everything is not perfect, beneficial objects always come with a few drawbacks. Parents and teachers should teach
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the new generation about
merits
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and demerits
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advancement as well as government should
also
take action
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against
vulgalarity
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vulgarity
on the
inernet
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internet
.
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