Although more and more people read the news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news for the majority of people. Do you agree or dissagree?

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Traditional newspapers are still considered to be the main model for people to read

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instead

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of modern platforms. In my point of view, I strongly oppose

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idea because of several reasons.

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with, reading the

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online brings audiences more convenient experiences. It can be explained that readers are allowed to update the

news

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regardless of time and

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due to the enhancement of technology.

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, when the MetGala 2021-one of fashion’s biggest and starriest

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- rolled out its carpet in New York on 14th September, the fashion community in Vietnam was informed immediately after each celebrity showed off their looks through prestigious online magazines. Compared with the conventional newspaper, which usually takes at least a week for the designing, printing and publishing process, fashion-

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have to wait for the local publication house for reserving out-of-date data.

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, the benefits of online sources surpass the old-style reading habits in environment conservation. The vast amount of papers consumed in printing

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was made from wood. Cutting trees for making papers not only significantly affects the disappearance of plants but

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the air pollution because of the toxic chemical from the production process.

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, printed

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is one of the contributors

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wastage

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of natural resources.

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, the prints on the newspaper might include poison, which can be harmed for users by finger touching. In conclusion, it is difficult to deny that newspaper holds an important role in extending information, I believe that online

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becoming

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and eco-friendly

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the aforementioned reasons,

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