In some countries, a high proportion of criminal acts are committed by teenagers. Why has this happened? What can be done to deal with this?

Crimes
committed by teenagers is a burning issue. It has increased at an alarming rate. A high
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of
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by young people in many countries. Apparently, modernization and westernization are to be blamed for
this
phenomenon.
However
, it can be reduced if precautionary measures are taken appropriately. To commence with, the two main factors for
this
kind of heinous
crimes
are circumstances they are grown as
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and the other is Impact of movies.
Firstly
, young people
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is developed from childhood with the situations they grow up with, as they give
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impact on their
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minds
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resulting in rude
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.
For instance
, according to a study the number of youth convicts got interviewed because to know the reason behind their act of crime, resulting in
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and
child
abuse to them by their parents.
Secondly
, movies
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will have
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impact on viewers especially adolescent minds, and they started to portray criminals as
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.
Thus
,
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the youth
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got diverted and directed in a wrong way and started to behave indecently and are started to commit
crimes
as similar in movie characters imagining them as
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.
On the other hand
, the potential way to curb
this
is to bring awareness about
the
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child
abuse. Government should take appropriate actions to reduce
the
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child
abuse by implementing strict laws.
For instance
, Dubai has strict penalties and punishment of 6 months jail time for
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parents.
Secondly
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board, there should be another board to scrutiny the characters of the movies so that they will stop portraying the criminal characters as lead roles. In conclusion, society along with
government
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should take steps to prevent
this
problem from deteriorating
further
. Even with some
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permanent solution for
this
problem is still out of reach.
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