Some people believe that travelling is a valuable experience; others say it is a waste of time and money.
Some
people
consider that having a tour to the different countries to see fascinating places is opportunity
to open the mind, while another group Correct article usage
an opportunity
people
think that travelling require
a huge budget and energy. Spending Change the verb form
requires
vacation
to trip is the same with force yourself to do what you can't afford, but I believe that travelling Correct article usage
a vacation
give
Change the verb form
gives
a
chance Correct pronoun usage
you a
explore
the world.
On the one hand, there are Fix the infinitive
to explore
people
who prefer to stay at home and get an
enjoyment from things that Remove the article
apply
not
require energy and effort. Definitely, travel is what they unlike to doing and they predict that Add a missing verb
do not
this
type of vacation have
Change the verb form
has
a
high consumption. A good example of Remove the article
apply
this
is freelancers, free graphic is the best part of their job and they can both work and relax. Thus
, they don’t need extra days for traveling
that consistChange the spelling
travelling
a
waste of energy and money.
Change preposition
of a
On the other hand
, some people
want to travel and explore everything around and it’s not depends
on their capital and the amount of time to trips. Exactly, these Change the verb form
it does not depend
people
know how to get a
priceless emotions and moments to the whole life, every picture in travelling have a place in the memory. Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
For instance
, choice
that was chosen by my sister was Add an article
a choice
the choice
travelling
every month to different places, she is Change the verb form
to travel
stewardess
. Absolutely, she get Add an article
a stewardess
a novel experiences
and saw various buildings and she said that she gets everything from life.
In conclusion, Correct the article-noun agreement
a novel experience
novel experiences
although
trips make people
to
spend time, effort and money, Change the verb form
apply
but
Remove the conjunction
apply
this
investment to
your life Change preposition
in
worth
it and give unforgettable moments to each.Add a missing verb
is worth
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