Some people think that government should ban dangerous sports while others think people should have freedom to do any sports ..discuss both view and give opinion

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days ,there is an agreement regarding the necessity of adventurous games.some
people
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tend to believe that authorities should
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prohibit
prohibited
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of
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sport
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activities
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while others believe, every person has the right to choose their
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sport
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instead
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risk
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am going to scrutinize
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both
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aspects in
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paragraphs before forming an opinion in the
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. On the one hand, due to various reasons hazardous
sport
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should be restricted by the legislation.
firstly
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,many
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participate
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without
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acquire
proper knowledge and practices which tend to threaten their lives.
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moreover
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plenty of
sports
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trainer
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lost their
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for
irresponsible
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behavior
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of the participant who is inquisitive to do risky games like skydiving,mountain
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climb
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people
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have enthusiastic so they do not have the
pations
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patience
to wait for their turn especially like teenagers.young
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create
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more violence in the
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sport
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arena.
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,
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an individual
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individual
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should experience every
sports
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activities
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. It would assist them to immense their immune system.
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,fear of
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could curtail through
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activities
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. To epitome, majority
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have the fear to meet problems in
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so they will commit suicide whereas, the person ,who engaged to dangerous
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have the will power to overcome any circumstances in
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.
Additionaly
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Additionally
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sports
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are
sort
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a sort
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of
excersice
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exercise
that promote the player's health. To recapitulate,it is essential to regulate extreme
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such
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extent,but it is wrong
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people
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from doing it.Every person has the
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right to experience entire
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of
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in
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.
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,they should undertake proper training and thoroughly understand the consequences.
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