University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. DO this advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages ?

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their home country.

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will often struggle with cultural and linguistic challenges while abroad, they will

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carrier. In my opinion,

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better for their long-term future despite the problem that they will

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. The main benefit of studying abroad is that

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will have a life

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that will improve themselves as people. Being in another country required them to move from their comfort zone to

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out there.

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, when I studied in Germany

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year, I need to push out from my comfort zone into a unique condition and I had to overcome

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of studying overseas because it will make you a better person. The main challenges that

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will face while overseas will usually from cultural and

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. These

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could make people become afraid to interact with other people

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would become a

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, while studying in German I had to frequently make a fool of

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because I try to speak

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which I have not fully

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yet. I feel embarrassed which make to miss

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my own

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. Studying abroad has become incredibly common. While

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and culture shock, it is in fact that

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barrier will lead them to be a better version of themselves. In my opinion, I strongly agree that the benefit of

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overseas outweigh the challenges

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

266 words

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University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. DO this advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages ?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Many believe that learning a language at an early age is better while others think such language should be taught later. discuss both views and give your opinion.

In some countries, it is possible to buy a wide variety of foods, which have been transported from all over the world. Do the benefits of this development outweigh its drawbacks?

Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believe that no one should be allowed to continue working after the age of 65. However, others say there shouldn't be a limitation on age and anyone should be allowed to work regardless of their age. Discuss both views, give your own opinion and include relevant examples.