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some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. discuss both views and give your opinion

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Many think that there should be less noise pollution, as it can be
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disturbance for the people's who are living in the society.
However
,
others
 believe that they have
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 to do sounds as much they can because of
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democracy. In my opinion, I think that
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controlling
volume
 is always helpful for
others
 to focus on their work. In
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 and foremost reason is today people who are living in the cities,are facing problems with neighbours who are residing with them.
For example
,residential complexes like apartments are hearing noises from residents who are living with them.
Secondly
,even students who are studying are getting disturbed
with
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 the loud noises and high
volume
 recorders.
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 as
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 DVD players with
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peak sounds and noise pollution.
Lastly
, citizens need to understand that
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controlled
music
 with low
volume
 always helps
others
 in doing their respective work.
For instance
, soothing
music
 always creates positive vibes
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 listens to that kind of voice. Governments
has
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 to control noises as it may affect the public in aspects of health
such
 as hearing and memory loss.
On the other hand
,
others
 believe that they have
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 to enjoy
music
 because they are living in
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 democratic world.
Moreover
, many think that
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music
 is the only solution and it has become
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a part of their daily activity.
For instance
, Singers and highly professional musicians who are stage performers need to practise their singing and instrumental
music
 with the orchestra team.
However
,
this
 can create a problem for
others
. In conclusion, any
music
 which is soothing to hear for us and the people who are living around will be an advantage to everyone. In my opinion, hearing songs with controlled
volume
 gives relaxation to the mind,soul and body.
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