some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. discuss both views and give your opinion

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Many think that there should be less noise pollution, as it can be
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disturbance for the people's who are living in the society.
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to do sounds as much they can because of
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democracy. In my opinion, I think that
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controlling
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is always helpful for
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to focus on their work. In
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and foremost reason is today people who are living in the cities,are facing problems with neighbours who are residing with them.
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,residential complexes like apartments are hearing noises from residents who are living with them.
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,even students who are studying are getting disturbed
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the loud noises and high
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recorders.
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DVD players with
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peak sounds and noise pollution.
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, citizens need to understand that
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controlled
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with low
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always helps
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in doing their respective work.
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, soothing
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always creates positive vibes
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listens to that kind of voice. Governments
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to control noises as it may affect the public in aspects of health
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as hearing and memory loss.
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to enjoy
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because they are living in
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democratic world.
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music
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is the only solution and it has become
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a part of their daily activity.
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, Singers and highly professional musicians who are stage performers need to practise their singing and instrumental
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with the orchestra team.
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. In conclusion, any
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which is soothing to hear for us and the people who are living around will be an advantage to everyone. In my opinion, hearing songs with controlled
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gives relaxation to the mind,soul and body.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • noise pollution
  • quality of life
  • noise levels
  • stress
  • disturb sleep
  • imposing legal restrictions
  • peaceful living environment
  • tolerance levels
  • personal freedom
  • business operations
  • designated quiet zones
  • commercial and industrial zones
  • urban areas
  • public awareness campaigns
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