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Most People today prefer to socialize online rather that spending time with their friends in the local community. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

#people #time #friends #community
It is irrefutable that in the contemporary era, it is a tendency for
people
 to socialize online
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time to meet
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 crowd and mutual friends. I,
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 deem that
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outweigh
 online time spending with
people
. To commence with, There are some pros why Communities who are in
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 generation like to connect online with
people
,
Firstly
, It is not only very
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convenient
 and comfortable but
also
 the various kind of
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personalities
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 encounter with each other, they
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 a plethora of positive things,
For instance
, Some time hard for
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 community to meet face to face so for them they prefer online.
Moreover
, Online is
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 flow of knowing
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each other
 due to that
people
 are updated with day to day life of their friends. Altogether, These are viable reasons we can not ignore. On the paradoxical side, there are many drawbacks as well, Sometimes individuals can not help via
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virtual
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contact
content
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 to
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suffer
 from some serious incident, as a repercussion
people
 try to restrict
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themselves
 to share their feelings with their mutual nurtures. Another, In order to
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 quickly
that is
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human
 psychology to become socialize offline. To
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 that after
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 of online
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socialism
 20% of
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 folks opine that it is
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hard to trust sometimes on their close mate due to lack of trust and bonding, So, these are demerits we can not keep away. In recapitulation, I would like to reiterate that though through Socialize online with their colleague have some merits, the disadvantages are far too many to be ignored.
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