With the increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources.

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amount

of used

oil

and gas are lifting up

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alarming rate causing the need to discover intact areas of the

world

. I strongly disagree with that statement since

oil

and

gases

are limited sources of energy,

moreover

, they might cause severe harmful effects on the Earth. Dependence on limited

resources

such

as

oil

and gas may outcome

as

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a crisis and wars for

resources

in the

future

. It occurs that

oil

and

gases

can not be renewed which means that one day we will be out of

such

resources

. Excessive use of them may make us more dependent on them which means that the majority of technology and things we have will work using them. If in the

future

we run out of

oil

and

gases

it will probably come out as a worldwide crisis, because most things are not working.

Moreover

, countries with

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amount

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of

oil

and

gases

will control the

world

, and other ones who have nor the money nor

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access to

oil

and

gases

will be in

challenging

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situation

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was in

early

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2000s when the countries

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had the most export of

oils

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and

gases

such

as Saudi Arabia made up a team and increased the price of

oil

in order to get economical

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and political safety.

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, since

then

their opinions

has

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been respected. Limited

resources

in the

future

may become a way to ruin or rule the

world

. Despite being

limited

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source

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of energy,

oil

and

gases

have many harmful affections on

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environment

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such

as water and air pollution. Oils often

has

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been transported using sea and

ocean

by ships. While transporting the

oil

, ships may have some problems that can lead

a

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loss of

oil

in the water. Actually, it happens often when ships can be destroyed or simply spill

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amount

of petrol.

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petrol can not be faded without human interaction. So,

this

oil

travels in the

ocean

and kills the animals and fishes in it.

Besides

, they block the sunlight and due to that seaweed and other plants in the sea or

ocean

can not produce oxygen. It appears that

gases

and oils which contain C – carbon in them, produce CO2 – carbon dioxide as an outcome of their chemical reactions. Though, every use of

oil

and

gases

produce CO2 in

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amount

that every

year end

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around 5 billion emissions on the air. Excess

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of CO2 may become the reason

of

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rapid global warming and climate change.

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,

oil

and

gases

not only eliminate alive creatures in the

ocean

, but

also

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consumes the oxygen on the Earth and

cause

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ecological problems. To conclude, I strongly disagree with the idea of opening undiscovered places in order to produce more

oil

and

gases

cause of

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amount

of needs depended on them.

Oil

and

gases

are harming our environment

everyday

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and can become the reason

of

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world scale

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crisis

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in the

future

.