With the increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources.
The
amount
of used oil
and gas are lifting up Change preposition
at on
on
alarming rate causing the need to discover intact areas of the Correct your spelling
an
world
. I strongly disagree with that statement since oil
and gases
are limited sources of energy, moreover
, they might cause severe harmful effects on the Earth.
Dependence on limited resources
such
as oil
and gas may outcome as
a crisis and wars for Change preposition
in
resources
in the future
. It occurs that oil
and gases
can not be renewed which means that one day we will be out of such
resources
. Excessive use of them may make us more dependent on them which means that the majority of technology and things we have will work using them. If in the future
we run out of oil
and gases
it will probably come out as a worldwide crisis, because most things are not working. Moreover
, countries with huge
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a huge
the huge
amount
of Fix the agreement mistake
amounts
oil
and gases
will control the world
, and other ones who have nor the money nor the
access to Correct article usage
apply
oil
and gases
will be in challenging
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a challenging
situation
. Fix the agreement mistake
situations
Example
of Correct article usage
An example
such
situation
was in Correct article usage
a situation
early
2000s when the countries Change the article
the early
who
had the most export of Correct pronoun usage
that
oils
and Fix the agreement mistake
oil
gases
such
as Saudi Arabia made up a team and increased the price of oil
in order to get economical benefit
and political safety. Fix the agreement mistake
benefits
Besides
, since then
their opinions has
been respected. Limited Change the verb form
have
resources
in the future
may become a way to ruin or rule the world
.
Despite being limited
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a limited
the limited
source
of energy, Fix the agreement mistake
sources
oil
and gases
have many harmful affections on Add an article
the environment
environment
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environments
such
as water and air pollution. Oils often has
been transported using sea and Change the verb form
have
ocean
by ships. While transporting the oil
, ships may have some problems that can lead a
loss of Change preposition
to a
oil
in the water. Actually, it happens often when ships can be destroyed or simply spill certain
Change the article
a certain
amount
of petrol. This
petrol can not be faded without human interaction. So, this
oil
travels in the ocean
and kills the animals and fishes in it. Besides
, they block the sunlight and due to that seaweed and other plants in the sea or ocean
can not produce oxygen. It appears that gases
and oils which contain C – carbon in them, produce CO2 – carbon dioxide as an outcome of their chemical reactions. Though, every use of oil
and gases
produce CO2 in different
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a different
the different
amount
that every year end
around 5 billion emissions on the air. Excess Add a hyphen
year-end
amount
of CO2 may become the reason Fix the agreement mistake
amounts
of
rapid global warming and climate change. Change preposition
for
Thus
, oil
and gases
not only eliminate alive creatures in the ocean
, but also
it
consumes the oxygen on the Earth and Correct pronoun usage
apply
cause
ecological problems.
To conclude, I strongly disagree with the idea of opening undiscovered places in order to produce more Change the verb form
causes
oil
and gases
cause of huge
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the huge
amount
of needs depended on them. Oil
and gases
are harming our environment everyday
and can become the reason Replace the word
every day
of
Change preposition
for
world scale
Add a hyphen
world-scale
crisis
in the Fix the agreement mistake
crises
future
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