With the increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources.

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. I strongly disagree with that statement since

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a crisis and wars for

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. It occurs that

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can not be renewed which means that one day we will be out of

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. Excessive use of them may make us more dependent on them which means that the majority of technology and things we have will work using them. If in the

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we run out of

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it will probably come out as a worldwide crisis, because most things are not working.

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of

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will control the

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, and other ones who have nor the money nor

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2000s when the countries

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had the most export of

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as Saudi Arabia made up a team and increased the price of

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in order to get economical

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and political safety.

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been respected. Limited

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may become a way to ruin or rule the

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of energy,

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have many harmful affections on

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as water and air pollution. Oils often

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been transported using sea and

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by ships. While transporting the

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, ships may have some problems that can lead

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loss of

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in the water. Actually, it happens often when ships can be destroyed or simply spill

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of petrol.

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petrol can not be faded without human interaction. So,

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travels in the

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and kills the animals and fishes in it.

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, they block the sunlight and due to that seaweed and other plants in the sea or

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can not produce oxygen. It appears that

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and oils which contain C – carbon in them, produce CO2 – carbon dioxide as an outcome of their chemical reactions. Though, every use of

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produce CO2 in

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that every

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around 5 billion emissions on the air. Excess

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of CO2 may become the reason

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rapid global warming and climate change.

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not only eliminate alive creatures in the

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consumes the oxygen on the Earth and

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ecological problems. To conclude, I strongly disagree with the idea of opening undiscovered places in order to produce more

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and

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of needs depended on them.

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are harming our environment

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