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In some countries, there are many social problems involving teenagers. Some people say this is because parents spend much of their time at work and not at home, do you agree or disagree?

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We live in a world, where we have to
work
 not only for survival but
also
 to fulfil our own wishes. Teenagers are the
future
 of their country as most of the things going to depend on them in
future
. Some parent's
work
 day and night not only for themselves but
also
 for their
kids
. I don't agree with
this
 statement as I have ample reasons to prove my point of view.
To begin
 with, Nobody can do what
parents
 do for their
kids
 they spent their most of the time on
work
, so just they don't have to face financial crisis in
future
, as the teenager moving toward their college they do need some financial aid from their
parents
.
For example
, In countries like the USA, Canada and many more, people do extra shifts just to be sure that they have enough money when they retire.
Moreover
, Every individual is different after hitting the age of 16 most of the
kids
 move from their parent's homes. Their
parents
 give them all the values and lessons that they need in
future
. Working extra making more money and spending their own time in peace will
also
 help them to keep fit and healthy in their life, as nobody can live with their
kids
 for the whole time, they do have to
work
 for their survival. In
last
, I just want to say that, after when the teenagers graduate from their schools, it's their responsibility to take care of themselves.
Parents
 cannot live with them forever they have to move one day. So, it's important for us to live them their life and stop making excuses.
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