Some people think the government should establish free libraries in each town. Others believe that it is a waste of money since people can access the Internet to obtain information. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Getting knowledge from various sources is most important at every age. One
group
believe that they can be able to get free books from
library
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,
however
, another
group
agree that they do not need
this
facility, where they already have
internet
for
this
purpose. I will discuss both views with
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as per bellow paragraphs. One
group
of
people
advocates that government should provide
library
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libraries
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cost free
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for every city.
This
facility is proved
benefited
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for older
people
, who can not be able to search any content on the
internet
.
For instance
, aged
people
must have weak eyes and having
spacts
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spaces
sports
on
it
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so they can not read anything
with
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small
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a small
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screen. The book is always comfortable for them. Having knowledge or sharing information is most valuable in
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today's
todays
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world so
this
should be free. The other
group
of
people
think that
this
is
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a total
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total
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wasting money to give free reading access to anybody. Nowadays
citizen
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citizens
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can use
internet
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the internet
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from any corner of the universe to get information.
For example
, Adults always has their mobile phone because it can work
like
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a computer so they can get all the details right away with a single click. They find wastage of money in having a book and sitting in a corner and read whatever they need.
Internet
is
easy
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platform for everyone to obtain anything from anywhere. In conclusion, I believe that government should provide free books access in the library only for the senior citizen residents
becuase
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because
the younger generation does not prefer to get any content with single sitting.
This
facility is very good, but it might have some rules, so everybody has their own zone to stay updated.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • public libraries
  • community centers
  • educational programs
  • democratize access
  • socio-economic status
  • resources
  • reliable internet access
  • digital infrastructure
  • forward-thinking
  • technological advancements
  • digital literacy
  • online educational resources
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