Some people think the government should establish free libraries in each town. Others believe that it is a waste of money since people can access the Internet to obtain information. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Getting knowledge from various sources is most important at every age. One
group
believe that they can be able to get free books from library
, Add an article
the library
however
, another group
agree that they do not need this
facility, where they already have internet
for this
purpose. I will discuss both views with opinion
as per bellow paragraphs.
One Add an article
an opinion
the opinion
group
of people
advocates that government should provide library
Fix the agreement mistake
libraries
cost free
for every city. Add a hyphen
cost-free
This
facility is proved benefited
for older Replace the word
beneficial
people
, who can not be able to search any content on the internet
. For instance
, aged people
must have weak eyes and having spacts
on Correct your spelling
spaces
sports
it
so they can not read anything Correct pronoun usage
them
with
Change preposition
on
small
screen. The book is always comfortable for them. Having knowledge or sharing information is most valuable in Add an article
a small
the small
Correct your spelling
today's
todays
world so Change to a genitive case
today's
this
should be free.
The other group
of people
think that this
is Correct article usage
a total
total
wasting money to give free reading access to anybody. Nowadays Change the adjective
totally
citizen
can use Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
internet
from any corner of the universe to get information. Add an article
the internet
For example
, Adults always has their mobile phone because it can work like
a computer so they can get all the details right away with a single click. They find wastage of money in having a book and sitting in a corner and read whatever they need. Replace the word
as
Internet
is easy
platform for everyone to obtain anything from anywhere.
In conclusion, I believe that government should provide free books access in the library only for the senior citizen residents Add an article
an easy
becuase
the younger generation does not prefer to get any content with single sitting. Correct your spelling
because
This
facility is very good, but it might have some rules, so everybody has their own zone to stay updated.Submitted by vishakhashah2393 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite