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to impose the Fix the agreement mistake
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tax
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food
is accepted whether it has effective and Use synonyms
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the increasing number of consumers. Change the verb form
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, it makes fast Linking Words
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less desirable as higher Use synonyms
tax
means higher Use synonyms
fast
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fast-food
food
prices. To illustrate, most Use synonyms
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, including workers and students, have Use synonyms
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limited lunch budgets. Correct pronoun usage
apply
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health
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in revenue from Replace the word
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health-related
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health-related
such
as extra support or benefits for restaurants that serve healthy dishes. Linking Words
For instance
, diners, that have been certified by the government that they serve healthy dishes, may get Linking Words
tax
exemptions or may be able to apply for a business loan from a state-owned bank.
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also
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people
from excessive unhealthy consumption. Government should use other measurement tools and create Use synonyms
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models
such
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people
on healthy products and unhealthy products and implement programs to help young citizens familiarize themselves with Use synonyms
healthy
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a healthy
diet
. Fix the agreement mistake
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Citizen
should be educated on the Fix the agreement mistake
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health
benefits as well as potential dangers that come with Use synonyms
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. Use synonyms
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, they can choose for themselves and unhealthy Replace the adverb
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food
may cause them to have serious Use synonyms
health
problems, which will surely incur unnecessary Use synonyms
expense
.
To sum up, using the policy of increasing Fix the agreement mistake
expenses
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others
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