in some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. it is therefore necessary for government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. to what extent do you agree or disagree whit this opinion.
In certain countries,
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excessive
food
consumption has affected the lives of many people
as it is the cause of health
problems. For the government to impose a higher tax
on this
kind of food
is crucial. I partially agree with this
statement because there are some alternative policies that may also
steer people
away from Correct your spelling
excessive
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excessive
food
consumption.
many diseases, obesity, diabetes, and hypertention
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hypertension
thus
coercive measures to impose the tax
of
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on
food
are accepted whether it has effective and is worth managing the increasing number of consumers. First
, it makes fast food
less desirable as higher tax
means higher fast
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fast-food
food
prices. To illustrate, most people
, including workers and syudents
, have limited lunch budgets. Correct your spelling
students
Secondly
, the state can use this
tax
to promote other health
policies due to the increase in reveneu
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revenue
revenues
this
extra rate can fund health
-related campaingns
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campaigns
such
as extra support or benefits for restaurants that serve health
dishes, may get tax
exemptions or may be able to apply for a business loan from a stste
- owned bank.
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state
In addition
, here are some policies which may also
steer people
from Correct your spelling
excessive
exessive
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excessive
unhealth
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unhealthy
consumtion
. The Correct your spelling
consumption
goverment
should use other measurement tools and create Correct your spelling
government
a statistical models
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a statistical model
statistical models
such
as educate people
on healthy products and unhealthy products and implement programs to help young citizens familiarize themselves with a healthy diet. Citizen
should be educated on the Fix the agreement mistake
Citizens
health
benefits as well as potential dangers that come with food
. For example
, once people
have been thorouhly
, they can choose for themselves and unhealthy Correct your spelling
thoroughly
thorough
food
may cause them to have serious health
problems, which will surely incur unnecessary expense.
to sum up, using the policy of incresing
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increasing
tax
of fast food
is important but the citizen
should use others measures to combine for the maximum benefit of the consumers.Replace the word
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