In recent years, the family structure and the role of its members are gradually changing. What kinds of changes can occur? Do you think these changes are positive and negative?

Today’s era has evolved in a vast majority of aspects. Lately, the family structure has changed including the function of its

members

, and because of

this

, some modifications can bring benefits or can be detrimental to the family and its

members

. Traditionally, the household’s provider was the husband

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and was considered to be the breadwinner of the family. The wife

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focused on household chores

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and looking after their

offsprings

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.

However

, with the recent evolution in today’s society, women are given the equal opportunity to have their own

career

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.

This

change has given the family a new face in

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society, where both

parents

are working and employed. Giving rise to a number of working households. These changes are accompanied by advantages and disadvantages. One positive aspect that a family can have is that with the opportunities given to

parents

to be employed, they are able to sustain the financial needs of their

members

and can provide

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other needs as well.

Children

coming from

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households can experience being sent to school with the best education, providing them with tons of opportunities in life. On the other side of the fence, a downfall of

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is that

children

will be left unsupervised by their

parents

and will require guidance through daycare centres. Aside from

this

,

parents

will

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the milestones of their

children

’s development and achievements at school.

Also

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parents

being not around all the time, cannot educate their

children

with important values that they should learn at a young age, and can impact their psychological or social development.

This

can be reflected later on in their teenage years, where

children

are rebelling against their

parents

. The transformation of the family

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has changed today’s society and its

members

in

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of ways. I believe that the change in the structure and function

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more negative outcomes , as it can indirectly affect the welfare of the

children

.