The tables below give information about the amount of beer and fruit juice consumed per person per year in different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about the amount of beer and fruit juice consumed per person per year in different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The tables show the amount of
beer
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and fruit juice consumed per person per
year
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in countries around the world.
Beer
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is most popular in Ireland, with the average Irish drinking 155
litres
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per
year
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. Germany ranks
second
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with 119
litres
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per person. In fact, the top six countries in terms of consumption of
beer
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are all European. Australia and The United States come
next
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in seventh and eighth positions, with
Netherland
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and Finland consuming the
least
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last
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beer
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of the countries mentioned. Finnish people only
drink
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an average of 79
litres
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of
beer
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a
year
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. The country which consumes
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the greatest quantity of fruit juice per capita
is
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in
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Canada. Canadians
drink
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an average of 52.6
litres
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each
a
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year
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, that’s almost double the consumption of New Zealand, which is placed at the bottom of the table. Another North American country, The United States, come
second
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in the table,
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German drinkers are ranked at number three, consuming an average of 38.6
litres
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annually. Swedes
drink
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approximately the same quantity of fruit juice as Australians, which is 35.5
litres
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per
year
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. The Finnish and the British
drink
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33 and 29.3
litres
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per
year
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respectively.
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