The tables below give information about the amount of beer and fruit juice consumed per person per year in different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The tables show the amount of
beer
and fruit juice consumed per person per year
in countries around the world. Beer
is most popular in Ireland, with the average Irish drinking 155 litres
per year
. Germany ranks second
with 119 litres
per person. In fact, the top six countries in terms of consumption of beer
are all European. Australia and The United States come next
in seventh and eighth positions, with Netherland
and Finland consuming the Fix the agreement mistake
Netherlands
least
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last
beer
of the countries mentioned. Finnish people only drink
an average of 79 litres
of beer
a year
.
The country which consumes by
the greatest quantity of fruit juice per capita Change preposition
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is
Canada. Canadians Correct your spelling
in
drink
an average of 52.6 litres
each a
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year
, that’s almost double the consumption of New Zealand, which is placed at the bottom of the table. Another North American country, The United States, come second
in the table, while
German drinkers are ranked at number three, consuming an average of 38.6 litres
annually. Swedes drink
approximately the same quantity of fruit juice as Australians, which is 35.5 litres
per year
. The Finnish and the British drink
33 and 29.3 litres
per year
respectively.Submitted by nguyenvankiensg on
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