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In the last 20 years there have been significant developments in the field of information technology (IT), for example the World Wide Web and communication by email. However, future developments in IT are likely to have more negative effects than positive. To what extent do you agree with this view?

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The sphere of Information Technology has been developing drastically since the
last
 two decades, especially in e-communication and database management.
However
, some people find positive effects of
this
 mentioned drastic
development
,
nevertheless
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 some are very optimistic on
this
.
This
 essay will accord with the latter view and I will discuss both sides with relevant examples. The unregulated drastic
development
 of IT more
tents
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 to have a negative impact on society despite the positive impacts.
Although
 Individuals Privacy and security have been highly impacting, in terms of fake news, cyberbullying, more overextending impact on corporate and country security threats
such
 as stealing company details, religious hate, terrorism
such
 as the NASA cyber-attack in 2008 and Google cyber-attack in 2009. Rather than social issues, significant health issues have been rising among people
in
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both physically and mentally with novelist
development
, which
highly
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 cost in quality of life starts simply with back pain, visual impairments, depression, whereas extends to life-threatening issues like strokes and hallucinations.
Therefore
, unregulated usage of IT can cost negatively in both qualitative and quantitative aspects of not only in person but
also
 to country’s growth and
development
.
Conversely
, the
Development
 of Information Technology has affected positively
to
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the
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society in terms of communication and database management. Though the COVID 19 pandemic hits the world, letting people
to
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stay at home,
,
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however
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 E-communication effectively helps to maintain
usual
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 business and personal life of the world with plenty of innovative and efficient solutions
such
 as Zoom for meetings and lectures, Trello for
maintain
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 teamwork and follow-ups, which ensures employees safely and efficacy. In conclusion, albeit the significant
development
 which the field of Information technology has been having for
last
 two decades, drawback it’s positive impacts which outweigh negative impacts, because of the unregulated usages of the sphere.
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