Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there is more advantage to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?

In recent years, the way of living has changed a lot. Nowadays, many

people

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like to live in a

house

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others think that

apartments

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are better. In

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essay, I will be exploring some of the benefits and drawbacks of living in a

house

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compared with

apartments

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with the disadvantages, the first

limitation

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disadvantage

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that many houses

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is that they lack essential facilities.

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is because

people

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choose not to invest in these things.

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, some houses do not have large parking spaces, elevators, security

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or

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common parks.

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apartments

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often come equipped with all these facilities.

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, with personal

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homes

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people

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, people

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have to take responsibility for all their in-

house

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maintenance.

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, if there is an electrical problem in a

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or something is

damaged

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damaged,

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then

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its

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the owner will be responsible for the repairs. In the case of

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,

this

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responsibility lies with the building caretakers.

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, I believe that personal

homes

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have many advantages over

apartments

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.

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, in most

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houses

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have the

freedom

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of making changes as per their preference.

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because they have the ownership of the

house

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and

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they can renovate as per their choice.

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,

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freedom

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is missing in the case of

apartments

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,

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their

people

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have to take approvals to make any change. Apart from the

freedom

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of change, most personal

homes

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are

lease free

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lease-free

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, once an individual purchases a

house

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apply

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then

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, their ownership never expires, unless they choose to sell it.

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apply

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apartments

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can be purchased for a limited time only. In conclusion,

although

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apartments

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have some advantages of better facilities and come without any worries of maintenance, I believe personal

homes

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are still a better choice as they provide

freedom

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of change and are

lease free

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maintenance-free

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