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Research has shown that overeating is as harmful as smoking. Therefore, the advertising of certain food products should be banned in the same way as the advertising of cigarettes in some countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There is a controversial perception heating a debate over whether the government should hinder a range of
food
items
 that does harm to the citizen’s health. While everything has its own merits and demerits, I consider myself a proponent of
this
 school of thought.
Firstly
, it is reasonable for the opponents to be in favour of keeping airing the advertisements of foodstuff
items
such
 as junk
food
, processed
food
, highly sugared beverages. The consumption of these
food
items
 is hazardous for citizen’s fitness. But these cuisine
items
 attract & fits the consumer's taste, appetite very well , consume little time to cook, and they have lucrative sponsors.
Therefore
, its gets away very quickly from the shelves. They contribute a major chunk to the GDP of
food
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 Industry. It is undeniable fact that power has to promote and support its economy to grow. From
this
 perspective, authority cannot come in the way of growth by banning
such
food
items
.
However
, there are quantifiable benefits for not banning the advertisement of certain
food
items
, but at the same time, its downsides cannot be ignored. Only a healthy
nation
 can be a happy
nation
 and a happy
nation
 can lead to a wealthy, strong and self-sufficient economy. By allowing the countrymen to pick
such
 unhealthy options, future youth will not be physically fit to run the whole
nation
.
Nation
 has to spend more on health care services to deal with a number of health issues caused by the consumption of
such
food
items
. society can very well promote local
food
 and make a sustainable eco-system for
food
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 industry. To sum up, after knowing the majority of the facts in favour of and against the move of the government to put a ban on the faux marketing of
such
food
items
, It is clear that the demerits of not putting a ban overweigh the benefits of allowing the marketing of
such
 unhealthy
food
 product options. I would
also
 recommend that the law can make the population aware of the side effects of the consumption and benefits of eating locally produced
food
items
, which will again give a boost to local markets.
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