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AN INCREASING NUMBER OF PEOPLE NOW ARE USING THE INTERNET TO MEET OTHERS AND SOCIALISE ,SOME THINK THIS HAS BROUGHT PEOPLE CLOSER TOGETHER WHILE OTHERS THINK PEOPLE ARE BECOMING MORE ISOLATED. DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.

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Communication
 over social networks around the globe has brought individuals together in as much as it has resulted in confinement. Online
communication
 is beneficial especially in the current situation across the globe,
this
 essay will analyze both views and give a conclusion. In the present
times
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people
 are influenced by social
network
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networks
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 and the internet.
People
 are able to communicate with persons in another continent
by
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 the click of a button, before the invention of social
media
 platforms it was almost impossible to communicate with friends and family in far off countries.
Besides
communication
 the internet and social
media
 platforms have been used for a noble cause and bringing
people
 together,
for
instance
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people
 have met online and gone ahead, got married and have families, business ideas and awareness have come in
big time
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 through social networking. We have seen families in dire need get help from the society and government because their case was highlighted on social
media
 platforms.
On the other
hand
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 Social
media
 and the internet is encouraging
people
 to live in a virtual world
thus
 missing
on
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personal interactions,
for example
 with the current state around the globe church services and lessons in schools are being
channeled
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 online ,
this
 form of technology has led to addiction causing
people
 to avoid social gatherings leading to desolation
this
 has escalated to lifestyle diseases
such
 as hypertension,diabetes,and obesity. In conclusion, Technology has impacted virtual
communication
 in the present world,
subsequently
, it has led to addiction with a rise in lifestyle diseases, and our culture of meet and greet seems like it is a thing of the past. 274WORDS
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