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Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organized and in the correct place. What is your opinion on this?

#people #home #workplace #place
Many argue that an organized and well-managed house and office including its cleanliness is
one
 crucial thing to have. By having those conditions, I completely agree that can lead to increase
one
's performance and able to better time management.
One
 of the most important advantageous by
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 your home and office clean is it will able people to maximize their working output. Due to the better condition of their surrounding, it leads to positive mood and
this
resulting
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 more concentration and in the
end
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 they perform well in their activities.
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, a doctor who always
work
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 in a neat and clean area will not be distracted to other thing and
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 enabling them to analyze their patients with full concentration.
Hence
, in order to enable people to give their best effort, their surrounding condition is
one
 of
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 factors to be considered. Another significant effect that can be gain by having a well-organized
place
 is, it helps people to save a lot of time when they are doing something. An individual who lives in a building that has a consistent position of its thing will benefit greatly from it since they are able to find whatever they need within that
place
.
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 convenience, resulting in
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 progress of their activities since there is no delay caused by looking at some items they need for their
work
.
Therefore
,
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place
 of items is important for continuity activities of our
work
. In conclusion, in my opinion, an organized
place
 always brings goodness to our life.
This
 situation is directly connected to our
work
 performance and our quickness to finish a going-on activity.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • organised
  • clutter-free
  • productivity
  • mental clarity
  • efficiency
  • professionalism
  • first impressions
  • ergonomics
  • aesthetically pleasing
  • compulsive neatness
  • functional space
  • minimising distractions
  • systematic arrangement
  • time management
  • work-life balance
  • streamline
  • feng shui
  • optimal performance
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