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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: explain what you are currently doing and describe your suitability for this area of work say when you can attend an interview You should write at least 150 words

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Dear Sir/Madam I am writing
this
 letter for a
job
 vacancy of Waitress posted in Times Now by your restaurant. I would like to present myself as a candidate with an experience of three years in customer service. I am a graduate in hospitality management and currently working as a Team Member at Tim Hortons in Sarnia. I have been working there for more than one year. I have gained experience in all fields from taking orders to serving, taking online orders, receiving phone calls, and managing tills.
Moreover
, I have a standard First-Aid certificate and the food handling certificate required for
this
job
. I have read that you are looking for a local person to work in your recently opened location in Sarnia. I have been living here for more than two years and I know
this
 city well. As I am residing here, I will be available for
felxible
Correct your spelling
flexible
 shifts and on-call as well.
Also
, my experience and education align with the
job
 requirements which makes me a suitable candidate for
this
job
. I will be available for a physical or on-call interview between 2 pm and 5 pm from Monday to Friday. Hope to hear soon from your side. Yours Sincerely, Amarjot Kaur
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task achievement
Your response to the task is strong and complete, addressing all the points required. However, you might want to include more specific details about your achievements in your current role to make your application stand out even more.
coherence cohesion
Your paragraphs are clearly divided and each focuses on a single idea, which enhances readability. This is well done and contributes to the logical flow of your letter.
task achievement
Your letter maintains a professional and suitable tone throughout, which is excellent for this type of correspondence.
coherence cohesion
You have used a logical structure, making it easy for the reader to follow your points. Each paragraph effectively supports your application.
coherence cohesion
Your greeting and closing are appropriate and professional, adding to the overall coherence of your letter.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • currently employed
  • customer service
  • communication skills
  • multitasking
  • hospitality industry
  • reliable
  • adaptable
  • enthusiastic
  • available for an interview
  • start immediately
  • experience
  • flexible schedule
  • team player
  • references
  • skills and abilities
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