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Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news for the majority of people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, most young
people
 surrounding me are always online and they can search and navigate everything on the
Internet
,
however
, crucial pieces of
news
 are still printed in the daily
newspapers
.
Firstly
, in the past, the official channel of
news
 to
people
 were the daily
news
 and magazines, but in the
last
 decade,
this
 tool has changed significantly and introducing government statements and
news
 through an official web or page on the
internet
 has become more popular.
Therefore
, nowadays, the most important pieces of
news
 usually are published either in
newspapers
 or websites on the
internet
. Young individuals prefer to read
news
 on the
internet
 because there is a number of advantages compared to the
newspaper
,
for instance
, we can read
news
 on the
internet
 as soon as it is published and without any time delay, and we can access the
internet
 through many ranges of devices
such
 as laptop and phone, and it doesn’t matter anywhere. The
last
 but not least advantage is that it doesn't need to have to carry them in the bag or hand.
On the other hand
, some elder
people
 still read
news
 and statements through the
newspapers
. I suppose that the reason why they like reading
newspapers
 is that
newspapers
 are real and not abstract, we can touch and see them. For me, an actual
newspaper
 gives me a feeling of reading something of value rather than just scrolling through random
news
 on the
internet
. In brief, reading
news
 on the
internet
 is becoming more common than the
newspapers
, but the
newspaper
 remains in demand because there are still
people
 out there, who would rather read
news
 from the good old
newspaper
.
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