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Some people think spending a lot on birthdays and marriage celebrations is a waste of money but others think it is important to the young people and the society.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #birthdays #marriage #celebrations #waste #money #society
Celebrating is a part of human civilization coming down from several centuries and as a part of
it
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people
 usually gather and share happiness and blessings. But
this
 idealogy is slowly changing towards spending a lot of
money
 as
status
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symbol
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 and power. Birthdays and marriages are common platforms where
poeple
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people
 meet and greet, in
this
modren
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modern
scenario
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this
 is taken as an
oppertunity
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opportunity
 by many
people
 to showcase ones wealth and show it as a sign of
achivement
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achievement
infront
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in front
 of their friends, families and peers. They
also
 want to increase their visibility in society to promote and improve their business by inviting all their partners, customers and several others involved.
This
 behavioural pattern has
greater
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 impact on society in a bad way by creating
an
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 stereotype saying functions are to be conducted with huge sums of
money
.
This
 is making a lot of
underprevillaged
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underprivileged
 and poor
people
to
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face mental agony.
On the other
hand
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 some
people
 take parties as an opportunity to get all their relatives, friends and families together as a reunion which makes everyone happy. These
get togethers
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 are considered very important for their
important for their
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children to learn and understand about
thier
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their
 relations and bonds. It is a perfect occasion for young children to socialize and increase their personal network.
Although
 marriage celebration
look
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 like a gathering of joy its main
agends
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agenda
agendas
agents
 is proof of commitment for both bride and groom
infront
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in front
 of all their well-wishers and perfect avenue for getting blessings. To conclude celebrations being very
intigral
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integral
 part of our culture and tradition to bring joy and happiness with a gathering spending a lot of
money
 on it is
a
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exeption
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exception
. I strongly agree
spending
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to spend
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 huge sums on these being non-mandatory
it
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apply
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is a waste of
money
.
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