“Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today's world." Use reasons and details to support your opinion.
I think many
people
agree that life without the internet
is unpleasant and unfavorable
. Researchers would have to go to the library to gain the information. Students might have to Change the spelling
unfavourable
use
an encyclopedia for their studying. Definitely, the use
of the internet
has become a part of our life. Due to the advent and development of the internet
, our lives gain a lot of benefits especially under the circumstance of COVID-19.
To begin
with, the broad use
of the internet
makes it possible to ease booking the leftover vaccine
. People
who were born between 1980 to 2010(so-called MZ generations) are very familiar with using the internet
and smartphone
(smartphone
is based on using the internet
). According to local news, a lot of unused vaccines are being trashed. In this
case, the use
of the internet
(exactly smartphone
) can help solve the problems. Many big mobile companies such
as NAVER and KAKAO-TALK provide the service that allows people
to reserve a leftover vaccine
. This
kind of system
does not only provide a convenience to people
but also
allow the government to save expense. For example
, my due day of vaccination was September 21, but I was able to get an early shot of the vaccine
due to the notification system
. According to the report the government published before the advent of the notification system
, they had to discard many unused vaccines. On the other hand
, after the introduction of the system
, they only wasted a few doses of the vaccine
.
Secondly
, the internet
help normalizes society and the world that has been destroyed because of the COViD-19. The government has restrained social life in order to prevent the spread of the virus. They have ordered the public to stay home
and be quarantined from work and other activities. The lockdown has made many people
lost their jobs and into depression. However
, the internet
and smartphone
minimize these problems. For instance
, people
can work from home
through the internet
. Students can study at home
making use
of the internet
(the online class) If the internet
were not developed this
much, it would be impossible to work and study from home
.
In conclusion, the widespread use
of the internet
allows people
to live conveniently and is going to make a better world.Submitted by sujin1344 on
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