“Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today's world." Use reasons and details to support your opinion.

I think many
people
agree that life without the
internet
is unpleasant and
unfavorable
Change the spelling
unfavourable
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. Researchers would have to go to the library to gain the information. Students might have to
use
an encyclopedia for their studying. Definitely, the
use
of the
internet
has become a part of our life. Due to the advent and development of the
internet
, our lives gain a lot of benefits especially under the circumstance of COVID-19.
To begin
with, the broad
use
of the
internet
makes it possible to ease booking the leftover
vaccine
.
People
who were born between 1980 to 2010(so-called MZ generations) are very familiar with using the
internet
and
smartphone
(
smartphone
is based on using the
internet
). According to local news, a lot of unused vaccines are being trashed. In
this
case, the
use
of the
internet
(exactly
smartphone
) can help solve the problems. Many big mobile companies
such
as NAVER and KAKAO-TALK provide the service that allows
people
to reserve a leftover
vaccine
.
This
kind of
system
does not only provide a convenience to
people
but
also
allow the government to save expense.
For example
, my due day of vaccination was September 21, but I was able to get an early shot of the
vaccine
due to the notification
system
. According to the report the government published before the advent of the notification
system
, they had to discard many unused vaccines.
On the other hand
, after the introduction of the
system
, they only wasted a few doses of the
vaccine
.
Secondly
, the
internet
help normalizes society and the world that has been destroyed because of the COViD-19. The government has restrained social life in order to prevent the spread of the virus. They have ordered the public to stay
home
and be quarantined from work and other activities. The lockdown has made many
people
lost their jobs and into depression.
However
, the
internet
and
smartphone
minimize these problems.
For instance
,
people
can work from
home
through the
internet
. Students can study at
home
making
use
of the
internet
(the online class) If the
internet
were not developed
this
much, it would be impossible to work and study from
home
. In conclusion, the widespread
use
of the
internet
allows
people
to live conveniently and is going to make a better world.
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