Recent figures show an increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18. Some psychologists claim that the basic reason for this is that children these days are not getting the social and emotional learning they need from parents and teachers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.
One of the matters raising certain concerns among
society
members is an increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18. To make it clearer, the problem is children
these days are not getting the social and emotional learning they receive from parents
and teachers. Nowadays, crime crimes was increasing increase all over the world. According to my, youngsters are not getting enough support from their parents
as well as from the teachers, while some children
are attracted children
attracted to the bad habits through their friends.
To begin
with, both the parents
need to work to get an economical status in society
. So, they have no time to check and teach your kids how to behave in society
in society
. For instance
, Vietnam in Vietnam, most of the people usually work so they leave their children
for grandparents or baby care centres and they do not don not have time to spend with them. MoreoverMorever, the teachers’ role is very important in the child’s life. The teacher is a key person person
in building a Remove the redundancy
apply
society
. Nowadays, the teacher has had to teach not only lessons in school but also
they should teach the kids how to behave in society
in society
. However
, in my opinion, a person’s character depends a lot on his perception. In fact, teenagers also
are getting attracted to their friends without any knowledge of moral values. They really do not understand what is right and what is wrong.
In conclusion, we can see that family love is very important. Children
need guidance on behaviour and work from parents
and teachers.Submitted by nguyennhuypy on
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