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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Some people argue that
children
 should learn moral values at a very young
age
 and
punishment
 is the best way to teach
this
.
This
 essay totally agrees with the statement that
children
 should learn the difference between
right
 or wrong at
early
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age
. Mother’s and
teacher’s
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teachers
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 is the best guide to teach
children
 what is
right
 or wrong.
However
, physical beating is not the
right
punishment
 to use. If we punish the kids for their
wrong doing
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wrongdoing
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 they understand the consequences for their mistakes and will never repeat the same mistake again. Teachers and mothers should punish the
children
 for their
mistake
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 which will help them to own their
mistake
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 and they will learn the difference between
right
 and wrong. But punishments should not be physical. Mother’s can punish their kids by not allowing them to touch their
favorite
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 toy or not giving them chocolates. According to some
research
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 the
children
 who are punished at
very
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 early
age
 are more reliable and confident than their peers who don’t get
punishment
. Physical
punishment
 should no longer be a method of
punishment
 in
modern
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 world. There are many other ways of
punishment
 other than beating.
For example
, there was a family in my
neighborhood
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 who had
child
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a child
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 after 12 years of their marriage. So they pampered him so much and never use to punish him or scold him for any of his mistakes because of which they started getting many complaints from school and
neighbors
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. He started bullying other kids and disrespects the elders. If they had given
right
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punishment
 at
his
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right
age
 he would have been a
complete
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 different person now. In conclusion, even if
punishment
 is necessary for
children
 at
early
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age
 it should never be physical
punishment
. Parents should make
children
’s understand about
right
 or wrong at
their
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 early
age
 which will make them good
person
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 in future.
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