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Individuals can do nothing to change society. Any new developments can only be brought about by governments and large institutions. How far do you agree or disagree?

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Some
people
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 believe that
one
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 person cannot do a big change in the
world
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.
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, only authorities and gigantic companies are able to make it. In that case, some of us suppose that the modern
world
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 will be never changed by only
one
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 man. In my mind, the mention earlier statement has a pretty good point.
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, I think the modern
world
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 that has so many techs for communication let even individuals make great things. As history has shown, there are a
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 of
people
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 in the past who made cultural, technical and political revolutions on their own. In those times, the internet did not exist and
people
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 could not communicate with each other as quickly as now.
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, historical figures
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 as Nelson Mandela, Mahatma Gandhi and Martin Luther King Jr. made a
lot
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 of significant changes for
society
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 and their work still help
people
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.
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, even those times
people
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 did amazing deeds. Nowadays, technical devices and mass media developments let us inform
people
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 around the
world
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 for several seconds. Web sites and smartphone apps give the modern
people
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 opportunity to change the
world
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. Influencers from the whole planet have made tons of helpful things.
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, a young video creator from the YouTube platform gets a
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 of donations for his support project. Using donations from other
people
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 he helped families who were affected by floods. All that activity was made only for
one
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 month thanks to new technologies. So, he alone did a
lot
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 for
society
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.
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, I think that
people
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 who suppose that only
one
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 person cannot do any change in
society
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 are wrong and I absolutely disagree with them. In conclusion, some
people
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 believe that only huge groups or authorities can make big changes in
society
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. Even though, I cannot agree with them. There are a
lot
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 of
people
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 who showed us that huge things can do only
one
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 person.
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