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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reason why someone should learn a foreign language.

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Some
people
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 believe that a foreign
language
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 is useful only when we travel to a foreign land or we work in different countries. According to my, yes we use different languages only when we travel or we immigrate to
other region
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another region
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 for a job. In
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 point. Some families love travelling they plan an international trip once a year and whenever we go to any other province we have to follow the cultures, rules of that province and
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 possible only when we know the
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 of that country. So to understand and communicate with other nations some individuals learn foreign languages. In ,India most of the public speak in Hindi and mostly everyone communicates with each other in the local
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 so foreign
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 is not useful for every folk.
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, some
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 who are working with MNC’s have to travel most of the time outside for work-related seminars or conferences so for
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people
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 learning a new
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 can be useful. Now a day’s English is known as a universal
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 in most countries
people
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 in other countries are
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 communicating with each other in the English
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.
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 can be a barrier for some individuals who want to immigrate to a foreign land for a job or to settle down. So they have to learn the native
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 of that particular province, like if they are settling in Germany
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 they have to learn German. Every homey has its own native style and they feel homely or affectionate only with those communities who understand their native style. To conclude,
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 can be a barrier for the public if they are travelling abroad or working in any foreign country without knowing their native style. But for all ,individuals it is not a compulsion to know the
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  • globalized world
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  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
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  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
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