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Should people spend a lot on weddings and birthday parties

#people #weddings #birthday #parties
Parties are means of celebrating
happy
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the happy
a happy
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 and memorable
event
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events
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 with family and friends. Programs can be for different occasions
such
 as birthdays and weddings etc. Many people celebrate birthdays and weddings for themselves and relatives. As they want to show their affection and capture memorable moments. Mostly, kids and teenagers are excited
for
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about
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 their birthday events as they tend to receive gifts. We planned
birthday
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a birthday
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 festive for our offspring, his cousins and classmates were
also
 invited. Our son felt joyful, as everybody attending the event brought gifts, which made his day.
However
, wedding functions are mostly for adults and
couple
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couples
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 getting married. It is a social norm of every culture that individuals who have decided to live their lives with each other, will organize a formal event and invite their relatives on the special so that they can share their contented moments.
However
, there is a flip side
of
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 celebrating
such
 festivals as it costs an excessive amount of money. It will be ethically and more appropriate to donate the amount to the needy and earn blessings and well wishes.
In addition
, it has become a status symbol to host luxurious birthday bashes and marriage rites. Which made it very difficult for the common people to commemorate
such
occasion
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an occasion
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.
Hence
 leading to depression among the people.
For example
, there are families in our society not having sufficient financial freedom to arrange marriage
ceremony
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ceremonies
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 for their children. To conclude, celebrating wedding or birthdays are important. As it
allow
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allows
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 human beings to adore and appreciate priceless moments.
On the contrary
, it should
also
 be taken into consideration that needless spending on
such
 occasions will have a negative impact on
the
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apply
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society.
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