In order to change their appearance people often turn to plastic surgery. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such an approach.

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In order to change their appearance people often turn to plastic surgery. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such an approach.

Fully explain your ideas

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## 문제 Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your own opinion. (2)

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The internet has changed the way information is consumed and shared among people. What are some serious issues a person can face associated with the internet, and what solutions can be implemented?

Some people believe that after hundred years life will be easier for most of people, while the others are unsure. What is your opinion?