The government’s investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Investing in art, music, and theatre are seem to be wasted for many
people
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and required to be in charge more regarding services of
public
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. These things are kinds of amusement which humanity
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be taken part
with
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This
essay will outline the benefit and
disadvantage
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of those things.
To begin
with the beneficial effects.
First
, recreation is the crucial part of living parallel to
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working. Arts,
musics
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music
kinds of music
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, and theatre are the example of recreation
stuffs
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that can be used to relieve the stress after gathered it from working tasks.
For instance
, listening to music
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has
slow
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beat can cause a
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interval in your mind and spit out any uneasy things behind.
Next
, increasing
creativity
with these methods
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quite interesting and
confirmly
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confirmed
confirm
confirming
work
. While you are painting, you can draw, colour, paint everything you want on a canvas which efficient your imagination and
creativity
. By doing that, you can apply your
creativity
in your
work
, and improving it. There are lots of advantage, but some drawbacks
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quite crucial. If those amusements are taking too much in the
people
life, works will be stuck, and the efficiency to
succes
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success
their job is decreased.
For example
, when
somone
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someone
addicting to a film, they can talk for days, and his mind
migth
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might
be full of movies
instead
of
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of
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his job. The
work
is not done, the success of the company, or country, could be
problem
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if many
people
have a lot of
this
thought. In conclusion, investing in
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can be double edge sword. It can improve
work
quality by forming more
people
creativity
who using it as a recreation in their leisure time.
However
, addicting too much might cause country tasks
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walking, and be ruined. Overall, I think that amusement is still vital for the
people
and worth investing
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