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Some people say that having a lot of TV channels is good, while others argue that it reduces the​ quality of programs.​ Discuss both views and give your own opinion. ​

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TV
 can be met in every house. There are a lot of channels and
people
 can switch between dozens of them for a long time.
Although
 some
people
 believe that it is a positive trend, I think that it can reduce the
quality
 of
programs
. There are a lot of topics that
people
 can be interested in like nature, politics, humour, world news, etc.
Thus
 it is reasonable that the number of
programs
 is increasing and all of them can not fit in one channel.
People
 can scroll out all the channels on the
TV
 and they will eventually find
programs
 or films that they are interested in.
On the contrary
, the increase in
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 number of channels means the lower
quality
 of the
programs
. Nowadays, a lot of creators of
programs
 target getting views even if they share fake information or mislead the viewers.
For example
, in
TV
programs
 like “Survivor”, challenges are fake and producers have admitted to hiring body doubles while in “REN-
TV
” creators talk about exposed alien
rumors
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.
Moreover
, it takes a really long time to find an interesting and useful, at the same time
quality
 program. In conclusion, the increase in
a
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the
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 number of
TV
programs
 can provide a range of options
people
 can choose from, but the
quality
 of the
programs
 can be affected negatively. It is
quality
 over quantity.
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