In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.

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is a very important part of life and
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should be completed before starting work or a job.
Education
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must be an inevitable part of any individual and everyone has the right to complete his or her study. IN the world there are many countries which are developing, and citizens of these countries are not financially stable, in these regions parents generally ask their children to complete their
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till secondary level as after that they can support financially to the family and can manage the expenses of bigger families.
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at an early age or after higher or secondary
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, they were asked to do small jobs, and due to ,that they cannot complete the rest of the
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they are willing to do. There are few institutions that run skill-based
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as from Bihar one mathematics teacher started one institution, he encouraged financially weak students to crack the Indian institution exam,
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is the most famous and prestigious exam in India and
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to impossible for financial weak candidates, Ram sir from Bihar supported to the poor candidate and they were able to qualify the exam.
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, due to poor family conditions pupils could not pursue their educational dream but to encourage continuous
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government has started scholar programs, if students deserve to appear for
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education
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then
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the government will bear the cost and their financial institution and some industrialist
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came forward to support these children to complete their educational dream. Universities should
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provide supportive and flexible classes options for working candidates and part-time educational institutions should
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be encouraged so that working candidates can
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get an
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whilst supporting their families.
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