Art is considered an important part of a society as well as an expression of its culture.Do you think it is important for the children to be taught art?Do you think children should be encouraged to focus on art rather than other subject?

In

this

emergence of modernization, learning of artistic skills

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be an essential expert of the communities, as it aids in expressing the nations traditional rituals. I definitely believe that it is crucial to teach

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artistic

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lessons

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younglings to preserve the nation's history;

however

,

instead

of giving focal concentration on the

art

,

youngsters

should

also

learn from other subjects.

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essay will explain in detail in the following paragraphs. To commence with,in my opinion,

art

is one of the most significant

lessons

which could succour in precluding the existing history from

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disappearing

,if taught to the current

youngsters

.To elaborate,in

this

modern era,

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of the information acquired by youths are through music, movies, entertainment, and so on.

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,in

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the younglings spend most of their hours watching these sources ensuing them to obtain massive knowledge related to their culture and

traditional

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.

Thus

, averting the erstwhile as well as present cultures from getting vanish .To

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,it is evident that

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nowadays bequeath of the

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history and traditional culture to the

youngsters

is feasible owing to the

artistic

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lessons

taught in the schools.

Nonetheless

, I think

instead

of instilling only

art

,students ought to study other

lessons

to adapt

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developing societies.To specify, the artistic knowledge can be inculcated

also

after

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graduation as it has numerous sources.

However

, subjects

such

as science, medical and technologies are

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one of the main fields to betterment one's living standard;

in addition

,it

also

enable

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the individual to

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socialist

socialise

with others on

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larger scale.

For instance

,my own sister who studied

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field is living a satisfactory life, whereas my brother

inspite

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in spite

of mastering the

art

field,still struggling to

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for jobs. To conclude,even

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art

has been playing an essential role in our

life

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and has been aiding in preserving our culture and

traditional

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traditions

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;

nevertheless

, other subjects should

also

be taught to the

youngsters

to survive in today's world.