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some people think the sense of competition should be encouraged, other believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete more useful adults.

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Now a day everywhere, there is
competition
 whether in education, sports, job or even in business. Parents are encouraging their kids to do the
competition
 in school, college or sometimes in job and it is planted in kids minds in
such
 a way that they
also
 come forward to the race of
competition
.
Competition
 is good but it is an inherent part of life if people are chasing and doing a healthy
competition
,
then
 that will be good. For ,example if there is no
competition
 in the market for products and services
then
 the market will not become a developing market and there would not be any marginal improvements, and without changes and modifications,
society
 will not improve.
On the other hand
, few parents guide their kids to become co-operative
although
 become supportive is good and due to the supportive nature of the people, each and everyone will grow but individuals are not jealous
to
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 anyone and because of the supportive nature of a member of
society
, nobody feels isolated or neglected and due to
cooperation
 everyone will get the equal opportunities there would not be any kind course, the crime rate of
society
 will
also
 come down and if
this
 kind of situation is there
then
 good governance would be established.
Lastly
, if compare both ideas about
competition
 and
cooperation
, I think that little
competition
, as well as
cooperation
,
cooperation
 is
also
 required in
society
 because due to
competition
 product quality improve and by participation harmony and pleasant atmosphere with governance will lead in
society
.
Therefore
 both the qualities should encourage but not only one quality to the extreme extent.
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