In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems? What measures could be taken to solve them?

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It is undeniable that the populations in some areas at the present are increasing the average weight. While they are decreasing the degrees of
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and fitness. From my point of view, I think that there are several causes that can cause
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issue and there can be
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solved by cooperation between
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in the city and the state government of each country. In the following paragraph, the reasons to support my opinion will be outlined in the detail. It is true to say that
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at the present time are often eating fast
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rather than
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in the past who are often making fresh
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due to they think that it is
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for them, and sometimes, they do not have time for cooking because they have more and more activities to do rather than cooking,
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as they have to rush their children to school in the morning in a traffic jam.
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, I believe that advanced technologies in terms of
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that are developed by many researchers can cause negative impacts for
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. The researchers are making constant orange juice which is contained a lot of sugar,
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, if
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are drinking these juices too much, they will have too much sugar which can cause
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obesity,
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. To solve
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problem, the state government play an important role in providing public
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and educating
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in the country about
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dieting and how to exercise correctly.
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, they should provide public gyms or fitness centres, and they should support some
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care policies for populations.
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,
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for
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in the city should start at the individual.
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, the citizens should eat healthy
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and have an exercise at least 3 days a week. In conclusion, I strongly think that lifestyles of each person have a major impact on their
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due to
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always cares about comfort than
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.
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, it is recommended that the state union and every person should take serious actions on
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problem, and the cooperation between both can lead to
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healthy community.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sedentary
  • obesity
  • overweight
  • physical activity
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • exercise
  • unhealthy diet
  • fast food
  • urbanization
  • modernization
  • stress
  • awareness
  • education
  • government intervention
  • policies
  • promotion
  • sports
  • fitness programs
  • health education
  • taxation
  • public transportation
  • infrastructure
  • parks
  • recreational spaces
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