Nowadays companies and other organizations are requiring their employees to wear a uniform. What is your viewpoint on this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of wearing a uniform? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

These days, many companies either private or public organizations have a working tradition to encourage their officers to wear a
uniform
. In my opinion,
employees
should wear the
uniform
at least once a week, and wear independently any
of
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formal
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the formal
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clothes
on other days. In
this
essay, I will explore
benefits
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and drawbacks of using a
uniform
at an office, and provide my idea toward the statement.
First
of all, wearing
company
dresses can contribute to royalty among
employees
toward
a
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organization, which is
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psychology
.
For example
, as I being a government officer, which I have to wear a
uniform
of the organization every Monday, It is my honour to wear
this
dress because
this
occupation
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a vital role in improving
well-being
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of Thai people.
Secondly
,
uniform
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uniforms
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can reduce the statement disparity among
employees
.
For instance
, people feel more confident when they wear the same
clothes
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others
,
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and do not feel disappointed for being different.
Although
there are many
benefit
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for
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wearing the same dresses, it
also
has various disadvantages including a surplus payment
,
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and a freedom limitation.
Firstly
,
employees
need to spend their income
for
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unnecessary
clothes
. To illustrate, they have to change their
clothes
as someones do not like to wear the old
clothes
again and again so they have to buy the new one, which is a surplus of
a
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daily payment.
Moreover
, uncomfortable
uniform
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uniforms
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can limit the idea and performance
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working. The google
company
is
a
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best example, their
employees
can dress freely and can
deccorate
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decorate
their office as their preferences. For
this
reason, everyone in the
company
is happy resulting in the high profit of the
company
. In my conclusion, dressing
a
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uniform
have
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both advantages and disadvantages
as
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aforementioned
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the aforementioned
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reasons.
Therefore
, the
company
should balance the pros and cons by creating the working tradition to wear the
uniform
at least once for benefits, and wear whatever they like for others to give freedom to their workers.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • uniform policy
  • corporate identity
  • work attire
  • equality
  • professionalism
  • brand image
  • personal expression
  • dress code
  • morale
  • team cohesion
  • security measures
  • cost implication
  • employee satisfaction
  • workplace culture
  • individuality
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