Nowadays companies and other organizations are requiring their employees to wear a uniform. What is your viewpoint on this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of wearing a uniform? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

These days, many companies either private or public organizations have a working tradition to encourage their officers to wear a

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. In my opinion,

employees

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should wear the

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at least once a week, and wear independently any

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formal

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the formal

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clothes

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on other days. In

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essay, I will explore

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and drawbacks of using a

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at an office, and provide my idea toward the statement.

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of all, wearing

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dresses can contribute to royalty among

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toward

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organization, which is

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psychology

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, as I being a government officer, which I have to wear a

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of the organization every Monday, It is my honour to wear

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dress because

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occupation

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a vital role in improving

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of Thai people.

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,

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can reduce the statement disparity among

employees

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.

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, people feel more confident when they wear the same

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with

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others

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and do not feel disappointed for being different.

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there are many

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wearing the same dresses, it

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has various disadvantages including a surplus payment

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and a freedom limitation.

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,

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need to spend their income

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unnecessary

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. To illustrate, they have to change their

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as someones do not like to wear the old

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again and again so they have to buy the new one, which is a surplus of

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daily payment.

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, uncomfortable

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uniform

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can limit the idea and performance

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working. The google

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is

a

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best example, their

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can dress freely and can

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decorate

their office as their preferences. For

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reason, everyone in the

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is happy resulting in the high profit of the

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. In my conclusion, dressing

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uniform

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have

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both advantages and disadvantages

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aforementioned

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reasons.

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, the

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should balance the pros and cons by creating the working tradition to wear the

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at least once for benefits, and wear whatever they like for others to give freedom to their workers.