In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or mall to do their shopping. Is this a positive or negative development?
Over the past few
years
local venders have been eradicated due to contemporary shopping patterns has been drawn Add a comma
,years
in to
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into
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mega-complex
mega
complex. Add an article
the mega
Such
impact will impose a negative effect on society since this
would lead to unemployment as well as inflation.
To begin
with, prices at shopping malls are significantely
at higher levels in order to cope with Correct your spelling
significantly
competition
. The central reason behind Add an article
the competition
this
is large complex have
been decorated in Change the verb form
has
awe-inspiring
manner for appealing the customers which Change the article
an awe-inspiring
proportionaly
increase the amount of rental, electricity bill and other relevant taxes. Correct your spelling
proportionally
proportionately
proportional
As a result
, same
product has to be sold at Correct article usage
the same
soaring
rate when compared to a local shop. Add an article
the soaring
a soaring
For example
, a recent study shows that retailing value of ladies bags in the same brand is twofold in high-rise markets when comparing to small shops; nevertheless
consumers are Add a comma
,nevertheless
eger
to buy them at high rates.
Correct your spelling
eager
Moreover
, when the demand decreses
, small retailers are in for a hard time, leading Correct your spelling
decreases
bankrupt
and Replace the word
bankruptcy
givin
up the business Correct your spelling
given
giving
permenantly
. Due to the consumption declining, profit reduces as a repercussion and Correct your spelling
permanently
hence
, closes up the available business opprtunities
. Seen in Correct your spelling
opportunities
this
light, smaller sellers and assistants could have loss
their positions which would result Replace the word
lost
Correct your spelling
unemployment
unemployement
unless Change preposition
in unemployement
government
would address Add an article
the government
immediately
. Correct pronoun usage
them immediately
For example
, an extensive survey has found that,
every six months at least one local outlet is to be eradicated.
To conclude, customers are attracted ever-greater by mall-complex which could undoubtedly result in Remove the comma
apply
deteriorate
of small business. Change the verb form
deteriorating
Thus
, creating an immense impact on the society ranging from unemployment to price soaring; however
, if the government address the problem correctly by funding or promoting them to choose their path to develop, this
might be solved upto
some degree in the future.Correct your spelling
up to
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