There is growing evidence that man-made activities are making global temperatures higher. What might be the man-made causes of temperatures rising? How should we deal with this problem?

Man-made activities

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as deforestation, urbanization, industrialization, etc influence the global temperature to escalate making it a burning issue

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threat for the world and the continuity of mankind. The essay below delves into the problems, highlighting some main causes which include excessive

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of fossil

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and

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pollution. The essay

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explains the

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that must be taken

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to mitigate the phenomenon.

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with, higher temperatures are worsening many types of disasters including storms,

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, floods, droughts. A warmer climate

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to changing weather patterns in

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a way that wet areas become wetter and dry areas drier. Apart from

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, it is the main reason for the melting of ice in Antarctica and bush fires in many forests.

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, the main cause for global warming is overpopulation which means

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in urbanization and industrialization. To illustrate,

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of people are increasing so are the number of accommodations and

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. These

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use

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up a lot of fossil

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which result in

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amount of

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dioxide emission. Folks are more inclined towards using private forms of transportation like their owns cars or motorbikes which again means excessive

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of fossil

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amount

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of

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dioxide being released into the atmosphere. The growth in

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industries

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and

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of

plastic

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directly add to the greenhouse effect and global warming situation. To put it more simply,

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is one of the most persistent pollutants on Earth and at every step in its lifecycle, even long after it has been discarded,

plastic

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creates greenhouse gas emissions that are contributing to the warming of our world.

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, deforestation, another human activity is

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a major reason as it is the only source to absorb

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dioxide.

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, overpopulation, immoderate

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of fossil

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,

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pollution and deforestation are the primary means of global warming.

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to deal with the issue,

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measures

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must be taken by both humans and the government.

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,

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should restrict the

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of fossil

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by encouraging other forms of energy

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as solar power, wind energy, hydropower and so on. Other preventive

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should be adopted as well. Unlicenced cars should be banned.

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emitting toxic gases should be warned and shut down. Laws against cutting trees should be implemented and anyone breaking them must pay a huge fine. The

use

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of

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products should be limited and

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instead

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paper bags and cups must be used. Human beings must be aware of their

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footprints and take actions to limit them.

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, to combat the problem, it is very important to restrict the excessive

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of non-renewable energy,

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products and

deforstation

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deforestation

. To conclude, certain human activities are causing the global temperature to escalate but if certain preventive

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are taken

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the issue can be resolved.