Spoken communication is more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is
common
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believed that written
communication
has less significant than spoken
communication
. While I think verbal
communication
has more influence than that
of
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written
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writing
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, I hold the view that written
communication
has its own power in certain circumstances. On the one hand, it is true to a certain extent that spoken
communication
can not only convey the information
,
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but
also
can express the speaker emotion. By way of illustration, when the newcomer
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into the market, normally the quantity of selling products is very low
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because the customer can not totally persuade to buy a product through the video commercial.
Therefore
, at that time, if the seller explains
its
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by using verbal
communication
which can show the emotions and tones to demonstrate the feature and quality of
this
item, it will make customers feel that
this
product can qualify their needs and wants.
Moreover
, the essential of spoken
communication
is more and more highly
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, when it uses in
meeting
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the meeting
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, seminar and so on .In the election ,The speaker ,
for instance
, can spread the energy and motivation to the resident in order to choose him as a new authority thanks to using
well spoken
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communication
. As the result,
this
communication
becomes
a
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important part
in
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our people’s life.
On the other hand
, written
communication
is a vital tool in specific situations. I would argue that for several reasons.
Firstly
,
this
communication
is
necessary
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thing in every field, especially business .
For example
,people must have a contract to guarantee the advantages that they have in
workplace
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the workplace
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.In
this
case ,
communication
can not prove anything and ask
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benefit if the worker get problems .The
second
point is that patients who suffer from disease leading to
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ability
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the ability
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to talk.They need to have written
communication
to communicate with other people.
Therefore
,
i
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believed that the role of
this
communication
is as important as spoken
communication
. In conclusion, while I support the view of the former, I believe that written
communication
has
their
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own value .
Therefore
, both are powerful in people’s life.
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